Room 5 Green Bay Primary School: Poems, by Zephaniah and Avalon

Sunday, June 22, 2014

Here is a poem using colours written by Zephaniah.

Here is a poem by Avalon about why she loves Auckland. She has used some beautiful imagery.

CHLOE said...: GREAT WORK AVLON THAT WAS A GREAT VIDO; June 25, 2014 at 10:29 AM
ZEPHANIAH said...: AVALON I like the way you not only just use boring words you use expression and big words.; June 25, 2014 at 10:32 AM
koito said...: I love auckland too. It a fun place. It has lot of shops and. Like sky tower.My family loves auckland.; June 25, 2014 at 10:33 AM
sebastian said...: cool avalon!; June 25, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Unknown said...: i love auckland wow your video was awesome; June 26, 2014 at 10:25 AM
Finley (at school) said...: Zephaniah and Avalon worked hard to make their poems!; June 26, 2014 at 10:29 AM
CHRISTOPHER said...: WOW!!!!!! but next time don't point the camera at the ground when you've finished the video; June 26, 2014 at 3:43 PM
CHRISTOPHER said...: you put a lot of hard work in that video avolon; July 28, 2014 at 7:14 PM
DisneyFan2015 said...: I like your poems Avalon and Zephaniah; June 17, 2015 at 12:16 PM

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