We have been writing narratives collaboratively. We were given a dull story about a lonely spider that we thought was a Level 1 example. We had to work in pairs to improve the story in order to show what a Level 2/3 exemplar would look like. Here are some of our results.
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Wow those are REEEEALLY good!! Watch out rūma 12 room 5 is catching you!
You guys put a lot of work into making your narratives much better than the one I wrote. Well done.
It also scares me whenever I come on your blog Room 5 because im absolutely TERRIFIED of SPIDERS arrrrrrrrrrrggggggge
I like the way you use wow words
i like how you chose cool words
Wow those a really good a fantastic keep it up.
I'm sorry Jacob for that
I actually don't find spiders that scary.
My favorite one is by Noah & Jacob.
one of bens posts
one of ethans posts
this is my favorite august 2014 post
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