Monday, November 4, 2013

Spooky Narratives

Last week we worked on writing spooky narratives. We focused specifically on writing orientations that created suspense. Here are orientations and illustrations by Nox and Avalon.


As the sun was coming down, I went into a haunted hospital with my friends Jessley and Jayden. Everything was dark, we turned on the light switch. But the light didn't turn on. We heard a noise, it sounded like someone walking up to us. But the noise stopped and the lights came on, then...
By Nox


As the sun was setting, more zombies awoke and more clear white ghosts came out of hiding while we were stuck in an empty classroom. Then the girl said, "Quiet I hear something." It was a moan and they had to stay quiet as a fly. Luckily they survived...
By Avalon

We also had a go at creating spooky narratives on Puppet Pals. This first narrative is by Jayden and Gideon. They spent a lot of time drawing their characters and their weapons. They also got creative with their backgrounds. Great job!



Here is Jessley's story about a haunted car.

10 comments:

koito said...

wow! the car is in the beach!

Ethan lee said...

I like the way you act.

Avalon said...

Ohh spocky story guys.

aroha said...

I like the way that you did not be silly.

andrei said...

very very haunted car just under the sea

warper-miner for andrei rey said...

Hauntly-hauntly car stuck under the sea, oh no! it begins to REVS AND REVS, clank bank clonk vroom!!!! 1000 kmph to go!

andrei said...

It spooks me up!

Ethan lee said...

Nies work gyis

finley said...

one of jaydens posts

finley said...

one of jessleys posts